Liar

I'm certain the lies I've told are about to unfold

And I'm certain that this whole world is about to know

That my life has been nothing but a lie

And the truth has come in full sight

The revelation is here tonight

Watch this facade finally die

 

Love me for who I am

Not for who I was

Reviews

[Cafe Reader]

Very good poem!

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. brilliant ... everyone lies ... but we've got to break out of the disguise ... this inspires ...

[Tina Kline]

Like this, like the idea behind it. Can you still love me, even though....you really find out who your friends are, they're the ones who love you and accept you no matter what.

[Alexa Tasch]

very nice. momo. one of your best.

[life in a ne/on tube]

Very well written, good job! (though you might wanna' change the double "for" towards the end)

[TTBoy28]

Very nice concept, momo! Just check the double posting of "for" - second to last line. Suspenseful! Very nice!