Liar

I'm certain the lies I've told are about to unfold

And I'm certain that this whole world is about to know

That my life has been nothing but a lie

And the truth has come in full sight

The revelation is here tonight

Watch this facade finally die

 

Love me for who I am

Not for who I was

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

I can identify with this write ....

Peace
Robin

[Sydney.]

Short but nice meaning to it. i can seriously relate to this

[YouoweYoupay]

Wise, though-provoking, and slightly painful. I enjoyed your little poem, thank you for sharing.

[Budd Black]

I really like this. We all put on masks and you never know if people like you or just the mask.

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[Inkcognito]

Such a profound write...we all have skeletons in our closets, wear masks to hide our true identities...somewhere along the line things do fall apart and then we simply need to be loved for who we are.
You conveyed the message so clearly, beautifully...well done!

[Graceful]

so true and so beautifully written. i loved it. awsome job!

[Crinkle°]

Amazing. Desperate. Strong. Good job.

[AreWeBothCrazy]

Every time I see one of tour poems on my read request page I get really excited :) and I loved this one! I've totally felt like this and I'm sure everyone has. It was super relateable and well written. Hope everything works out for you, keep writing

[Grace Catherine C.]

Lovely