Don't drag and bag.

Don't drag and bag.

A Poem by momochiloves
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I just had some extra time, and this came out of it.

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I may be random
And send a message out of the blue
But you know how it feels
to want to be told something true
You know that feeling in the back of your head
that tells you something
and you put it to bed
because you just don't wanna hear it read
everyone gets it
even if its hidden in the candle lit
room with too much time
it will consume
Stop dragging and bagging
on yourself
when you know your knowledge isn't lagging
everyone is someone
and someone is everyone
because no matter
what battle comes by
or how far you dare to travel
someone is out there who is everything to you
and you are someone
who is everything to them.

© 2011 momochiloves


Author's Note

momochiloves
I really hope you like it.:)

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I like it, its awesome

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"But you know how it feels
to want to be told something true"
Lovely poem. Some poems pull the reader into despair, some a peek at love, at passion. Your jewel is a little spot of tentative hope. A stubborn candle flame. Please keep shining your light~

Posted 12 Years Ago


It was really good
Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem is soo cute and optimistic! I love every line. Its very well written. Everyone is important to someone. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you soo much everyone!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very powerful and deep, I really like this. I found it personal, I can feel the emotions as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


your words run deep, and your writing has a beautiful flow to it! your poem left me breathless!! great job!!:]

Posted 12 Years Ago


Welly you hoped right great writing!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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momochiloves
momochiloves

Ambler, PA



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