She's young

Shes young. She sits in her room "I hate you, I HATE YOU!" 

She can't wait to get out of here. She can't wait to be free.

 She's out all night to be rid of this place. She does these things to forget. Tomorrow it's back to that place.

 She meets him. Boy meets girl. He keeps her safe. 

She realizes she's finally happy. A long life ahead. 

Things turn bad. She's young. She sits in their room 'I hate you, I HATE YOU!" 

They make up passionately. She's happy again. 

She gets sick. What's happening? she wonders. The little plus sign. He's overjoyed. She's scared. He keeps her safe.

 And then they were 3. 

She's gorgeous. She's so tiny. 

She gets sick. What's happening? she wonders. The little plus sign. He's overjoyed. She's scared. He keeps her safe. 

And then they were 4. 

She's gorgeous. She's so tiny. 

He's too busy. She can't remember. She's crying. Why is she always crying? He wonders. She's overwhelmed. 

She's young. She sits in her room "I hate you, I HATE YOU!" 

She can't wait to get out of here. She can't wait to be free.

Reviews

[Karen Redburn]

Hey there, welcome to WC! This is a sad tale. I wonder if the girl counted her blessing instead of noticing what's missing, it might help? I read another piece here somewhere about how fast it all slips away, even though right now it seems like the days are merging into each other aimlessly. Before she knows it, they will be over. Great write and would love to learn more about this character!

[Gee]

Read a like my elder sister who then palmed two kids off onto mum and ran off and had another three !! Seen a lot of what you have written as I grew up. Enjoyed the read

[Marisa M]

Thats sad! I hope everything worked out for your sister in the end though! everyone goes through seriously rough patches. It's about making it out the other side.

[Coyote Poetry]

A realistic journey in the poetry. Life is a roller coaster. Good and bad days. I liked the story in the poetry. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you Marisa for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Marisa M]

very kind words! thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Marisa.

[Gejodi]

The question is why? I would guess some are never content and others may hate themselves? Makes you ponder great job!

[Marisa M]

Life is confusing. So pondering is an easy way to pass time! Thank you :)