The Used.

The Used.

A Poem by DanaMagical

I listen to your mistakes

but you never have time for mine.

 

I make your problems disappear

yet mine are still an issue.

 

I try and explain myself

but you always drag yourself in it.

 

Again I solve your problems

and you ignore mine.

 

I can tell your using me

but I dont have the guts to stop you.

 

Im the reason your alive

but your the reason I hold it all back.

 

 I cant go a week without you

and your the main reason i smile.

 

I just wish u'd treat me

the way I treat you.

 

Because I cant live a day

without the one who treats me

like this.....

 

 

 my bestfriend.

 

 

 

© 2008 DanaMagical


Author's Note

DanaMagical
this poem was not meant to hurt anyone it was ment to show whats really going on. im sorry if it made u depressed in anyway [[ best friend]]

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is this about meeeeee???

Posted 16 Years Ago


This was good.

Friends we love, attatudes[sp?] we hate.
Sometimes it comes in a package,
and that sucks.

I have the same problem going on and i know how hard it is to stand up and say "listen to me, for once."
I feel your pain.

Great Write.

XxStaySweet,
Rina!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I think we have all had a friend like this. It is an easy poem to relate to.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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I like to write. Basicly why I have this page. I'm 14 :D And a freshman at Centrall I live on Hobo Island [[ Omaha, Nebraksa ]] Status: independent I'm kinda a piercing junkie, and a hypocrite... more..

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