Sugar Plum

Sugar Plum

A Poem by Molly D

1.

 

I'll show up lust-drunk and reckless,
swaying in the scent of clean sheets
and slow burning sandalwood.

 

2.

 

Fumbling for zippers by cellphone light,
giggling over the sounds of beltbuckles
and competitive kisses.

 

3.

 

Turn up the classic rock station,
set the alarm for 7 a.m.,
and give up on trying to sleep early.

 

4.

 

Laying near the open window,
our skin will rise in goosebumps
with the cold, silent air.

 

5.

Waking up in foreign linen,
I'll kiss you goodmorning, goodbye,
and then tip toe back home.

© 2009 Molly D


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Sounds like a lovely time..I like your poetic description.
romantic , sexy and playful is what I get from the poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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BjH
numbering the stanzas made me pay more attention to each one
maybe what you indended
or maybe not
either way
works
cheers
Benjamin

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really love this, I think it's the simplicity of it!

I'm away to read more

AHouseOfChambers

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very detailed and described
extremely well

What a great piece to read
I almost felt the cold air as you said
in this poem, though it's not morning

Great write!

Orlando M

Posted 15 Years Ago


A very and interesting write here......i like it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Intricate and delicate, images capture moments, reveal night secrets... Love the subtlness of this piece! Thanks for sharing...

Posted 15 Years Ago


Its a very nice choice of writing you picked, you can describe and portray it well, I enjoyed it :) most of your work teases the mind with erotic filled fantasies and sex driven antics, but in the end you settle everyone's minds with a simple yet somehow romantic and exciting tale of midnight love :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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