Revenge Sex

Revenge Sex

A Poem by Molly D

when you're sitting at home

brooding,

moping,

pacing

and stewing

thinking of what i'm doing

rest assured that the

"what" should be a "who"

 

and i'll be screaming

scratching

tugging

biting

and moaning as loud as possible

because orgasms are so much better

when you're not involved.

© 2008 Molly D


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Oh this one is deadly, LOL..... Served coldly and I am sure he is hurting very deeply. Super nice poem loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


holllyy shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh lol!! damn i jus enjoyed the anger in it! damn sumbodys got it comin to em! damn that was hott.

Posted 15 Years Ago


nice, if this if for someone you know then that was a total punch to the balls lol nice poem

Posted 15 Years Ago


For some reason at the end of this piece, I swore I heard a bullhorn somewhere.

Posted 15 Years Ago


uhh!! that was hot!!! hot tempered.. could sense and feel the rage that ran thru the poem... lovely write... kudos!!!!

Regards,
Poetic S()ul

Posted 15 Years Ago


great, ouch, and wow. it captured so much honestly while actually saying so little aloud. The imagery was breathtaking in that it stimulated my overactive imagination. Good write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can feel irritation and the bite in it. Last line in particular made me grin. Well penned.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ha! Nice piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


deliciously fantazmic ;P

Posted 16 Years Ago


I felt rushed to read this, so you got me involved in the rush-ness of the moment I guess you could say.
I love how abrupt it was at certain parts, then how smooth it filled out at th end.
"tugging.
biting." - abrupt

"and moaning as loud as possible" - smooth fill


Like an orgasm I suppose! xD

Posted 16 Years Ago



First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

465 Views
23 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on May 28, 2008

Author

Molly D
Molly D

Writing
Skyscraper Skyscraper

A Poem by Molly D


Old World Old World

A Poem by Molly D


Ore Ore

A Poem by Molly D



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Sometimes Sometimes

A Poem by TamiViolet


Oh, Yes Oh, Yes

A Poem by TamiViolet