Forgive the Man in the Mirror

Forgive the Man in the Mirror

A Poem by Michael Stevens
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Forgiving yourself!

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Forgive the Man in the Mirror

 

What a b*****d!  Look at him, won’t even meet my eye

From the guilty look on his face,

he must have done something so horrendous,

he can never be forgiven!  If I could tell him,

but he’ll never listen to me, I’d tell him to give himself a break,

that forgiving oneself is often the hardest thing

 

© 2013 Michael Stevens


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I love this. It's so true. We all have times where we hate the person we see in the mirror. I love that instead of it being an outside person it is an inner persona speaking about the person who is looking into the mirror in disgust. This is excellent. Great Job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mary!
Very true. I would love to see this scenario, a man who's own reflection is guilty of the man looking in the mirror. To never face one's own guilt because of shame. If that made any sense at all. :)

And I think people are demonic in some way. We just hide it well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

Sort of a twist on 'The Picture of Dorian Gray'; I sort of agree with your last point, for everyone .. read more
char

11 Years Ago

Loved that story. I remember reading that back in second grade. I thought it was nice to attack age .. read more
Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

Well, maybe not PERFECT!
When one sees a differently personality of one's self in a mirror, it's not right. Mirror's reflect what's before it, if not it's demonic.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

Yeah, if I looked in the mirror and saw some freaky dude, I'd say, "Say, there's a freaky dude in my.. read more
Junert

11 Years Ago

Hahaha
Michael Stevens

11 Years Ago

Yeah, but you're a girl!

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Michael Stevens
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I write for fun; I write comedy pieces and some dramatic stuff. I have no formal writing education, and I have a fear of being told I suck, and maybe I should give up on writing, and get a job makin.. more..

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