Distract

Distract

A Poem by Chuck

I am not sure what I did to deserve

This strange sense of loneliness

But something keeps nagging me

Suggesting I must have done this to myself

 

Even with the consoling arms

Of the One I Love around me

All my hopes for the future

Are changing shape before my eyes

Desolation creeps between every supportive syllable

 

I so long for a minor distraction

Something to ease the seriousness

 Of the prospects I undoubtedly face

In the sea of smiling faces

That bring judgment from every angle

 

What does it say about me

That when I need one the most

I lack

A true Friend?

 

© 2009 Chuck


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We've all felt like this, some time or another. Again, your writing's believability, realness, shocks me. Your words don't even seem like words--more that I am looking into a window, and seeing the scene before my eyes. Again, a great write that rings absolutely true. It was a pleasure to read.
--William

Posted 14 Years Ago


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The last verse really brings it home. It ties the whole piece together beautifully. This was a great read. It flowed so nicely.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We've all felt like this, some time or another. Again, your writing's believability, realness, shocks me. Your words don't even seem like words--more that I am looking into a window, and seeing the scene before my eyes. Again, a great write that rings absolutely true. It was a pleasure to read.
--William

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chuck
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I do not claim to be a writer - But I am an artist and I will stick to painting and arts of that sort. I love to teach art, and I love to learn. I am trying to find exactly who I am and who I want to .. more..

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