Ishermmecitotive

My insanity displayed

 

I boarded a train to Santa Fe

Only to find it had been delayed

So I spoke to the one who’s name is Ray

For he was the conductor of the tiny train

 

He only replied with a simple smile

That I must be confused or maybe senile

For this was no ordinary locomotive

This was the “Ishermmecitotive”

 

I asked him what that meant for me

And he replied with lots of glee

“This is the train that’ll take you to

A hidden world within your shoe”

 

I was completely amazed and kind of confused

But he seemed to be content and amused

I wondered if he was playing a joke

But then suddenly I awoke.

Reviews

[Gionelly Kiss]

Once again your creativity is wonderful. Keep in mind your audience and be careful not to make your imagination too distracting. Truly appreciate your style--so unique--maybe give me a few pointers. Please, take a look at mine and tell me what you think (they might be, too, serious, I guess)! Thanks for sharing.
Gionelly*Kiss

[LivingDeath]

Different for sure, but its cool. The use of your imagination in this piece is exquisite, your lucky to have it because some people just lose their imagination and cant create pieces like this. Very Good Job :) great write