Promises

My musings on how to escape my depression, written but never given to a friend.

I wish I hadn’t promised you

 

To not kill myself or cut

 

Because right now, I feel

 

Like I have to

 

I feel dead,

 

Maybe if I were to hurt myself

 

Then the pain would bring me back

 

And I could be alive again

 

If I’m alive

 

Promise me,

 

Don’t judge me

 

And just understand

 

Promise me

 

Unconditional love

 

Promise to help me

 

Get over him.

Reviews

[deeps]

I like this write alot. makes such a wonderful point and statement. Very written and well said.

[LostInThought ♥]

I love all the emotion in this! Getting over someone who you cared about hurts... It also flows beautifully. When writing poetry it can sound forced, but yours dosen't. :) Good write!

Would you mind reviewing some of my work?