Dancing Eyes

Dancing Eyes

A Poem by Mercedes
"

The way I felt when he looked at me.

"

Your eyes, as I dance,

So beautiful, so bright

They sparkle, shine

I spin away, and

Begin to miss

Your bright eyes

Those dancing eyes,

Those laughing eyes.

© 2009 Mercedes


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Dancing Eyes is a wonderful but brief .. feel good poetry in motion (pun intended)...
you must be a good dancer if his eyes are dancing

I love the laughing eyes... It's feels good when you can
make someone's eyes dance the tango..
Kudos
LeeLee


Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 8, 2009

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Mercedes
Mercedes

Des Moines, IA



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