Deeply Falling

Deeply Falling

A Poem by Mercedes
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How it feels to fall in love.

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A simple brush of the fingers

Can trigger a sudden attack

Of this feeling called love

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Reach out a hand to lose your sense

Of judgment, trust, anything

In a game of fools

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Trust not the words of the betrayed

Be wary of the those fallen

Careful not to step over the canyon

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Falling almost floating

Into a chasm of brightened depths

Lit by such a magical feeling

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Faster the heart beats

A blush covers pale face

As love at first sight consumes.

© 2009 Mercedes


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A beautiful poem. A pleasure to read.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Mercedes
Mercedes

Des Moines, IA



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