Reflection

A person close to me acted like I didn't exist at all.

The mirror reflects nothing

I’ve disappeared

In my eyes, in yours

I’m gone

My ice cold hands

My ice cold heart

I can’t hold you

I can’t feel you

I’m numb

Dead alive

A sleeping life

Alone

Without

Hidden in a mirror

No reflection cast

I’m gone -

In your eyes.

Author's Note

When I re-read this, I discovered that it could sound like a vampire was speaking in this. So I would like to know what anyone else thinks on that point... Thank you.

Reviews

[angry_pandit]

do know about vampires, but gave me a feeling of breathlessness, suggesting how whirlwind your mind must be when you wrote. i enjoyed it.

[Satellite Heart]

cool pieece, I liked it, Great Work.