Ein Traum damit blau

i am not german, but i love the language, if i did or spelled something wrong please let me know love always,

Ein Traum damit blau

Ein Traum damit entfernt

Wage ich zu träumen?

Ein Traum damit wahr

Mein Herz damit kalt

Mein Herz, ein Stein damit noch

Wagt es zu schlagen?

Gebe ich es auf zu halten?

 

English version

 

A dream so blue

A dream so far away

do I dare to dream?

A dream so true

My heart so cold

My heart a stone so still

Does it dare to beat?

Do I give it up to hold?

Author's Note

i am not german, but i love the language, if i did or spelled something wrong please let me know
love always,

Reviews

[Michael X]

This poem is dreamy and promotes a feeling of enchanting yearning
to dream is to surrender the heart
lovely, the form is perfect in way of projecting gentle sentiment
beautiful reading, thanks for sharing

[Amber Michelle]

pretty, pretty amzing. i must say.
i love you a whole bunch!