Feelings

make me feel something

the only reason i am present

is for you to 

make me feel something

deep inside

in my heart

in my stomach

butterflies should be cutting 

deep inside

due to the ferocity of their wings

but they are stuck in their cocoons 

they are resting on a dying flower

make me feel something

make me feel anything

the only reason i am present

is for you to

make me feel anything

Reviews

[Pax]

our feelings makes us imagine many things... beautiful or sad or grief and many more, and when it transformed into words, many things can achieved. very nice piece!

[gobo]

Normally I wouldn't imagine butterflies to be cutting, nor have ferocious wings, so it really drives home the notion of wanting to feel something. I liked your poem, it feels passionate and fiery.

[Monica Salazar]

thank you!