Are we done?

22/02/09

Captured my thoughts,

damaged and done,

lost somewhere inside,

you just might have won,

my dreams collide and the fruit of my yearnings grow,

all the while you are far, bitter and cold.

Our dreams collide in time,

we are not one,

we are not one.

Our hopes are gone now,

yet we don't move on,

we don't move on.

Our lives are far now

but we see and listen.

My life without you is none

but we are done.

 

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

If the other party you are writing about feels the same then you are most likely not done.. time could finish it.. or you could explore it if it's welcome.. I've had these same feelings before and it's not always two-sided... or the other may not acknowledge.. either way I feel exactly where you are coming from.. thank you for putting yourself out there in honesty.. that takes courage to admit ... hopefully you can share this with the other person before it is too late! You also never know someone may come along who puts the thoughts of the other away for good! Thanx for sharing!

[Erotic Druid]

are you truly done? you will not be sure till you ask!

[Rhine Wolf]

brilliant!

deep and emotional, very moveing.

Blessed be,
Fallon