This is the first time I'm reading you & your poem is heartfelt. The most powerful line: "wherever and whenever" -- you say so much with just those three words. But still, even tho you pack your words with meaning, I like longer poems. I would like to see more of your mom in a poem. I'd like to see what she looks like, what she talks like, how she listens, how she smells, what she enjoys doing. Looking forward to more from you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Very love your think. Insya Allah next time i write it
This is the first time I'm reading you & your poem is heartfelt. The most powerful line: "wherever and whenever" -- you say so much with just those three words. But still, even tho you pack your words with meaning, I like longer poems. I would like to see more of your mom in a poem. I'd like to see what she looks like, what she talks like, how she listens, how she smells, what she enjoys doing. Looking forward to more from you! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Very love your think. Insya Allah next time i write it
Our mothers are very special people. Even when they are gone, we remember their words and the lessons they taught us. A lovely tribute to your mother. Lydi*