MY BEST LOVELY

This poem talking about love, from husband to wife.

My best lovely is my wife
With you look this world is paradise

Every moment
I forget how to cry

You are my best lovely
From God to me

Moh. Ghufron Cholid
Junglorong, 3 of July 2020

Reviews

[Moh. Ghufron Cholid]

Dave, thank you very much about your apreation in my poem.

[Dave]

You are lucky to have found your paradise.
I am fortunate that I have found mine too.

Take care - stay healthy - Dave

[Moh. Ghufron Cholid]

Barleygirl, thank you and InsyaAllah

[barleygirl]

Excellent tribute to your wife & I bet this woman knows she is well-loved. As I said about your other poem, I like longer poems. I hope you can write a poem & feel free to go on further about someone as special as this. For example, draw a word picture of some small mannerism she has that makes you smile every time you see it. The way she lifts her eyebrow when she's questioning you? The way she dips her toes into water & giggles? Those are the kinds of details that bring writing alive. Hope you'll be writing & posting more (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie