darkness

there's no life in the dark only survival .there's time where life can't be seen

I have a fear of the lights going away. In the dark everything creep away the day, they move behind the shadows and the living they slay.
Creeping in the dark of the night! Hollowing every part of your sight! Making fear is your friend to fight, in the night there's no light to see what gave you the bite, 
Creeping inside a cave of darkness, looking for fading memories of you with kites , watching the death of everything you called precious . Hearts get stabbed and turn the pieces, the day the sun hides and the dark increases .
Wait! 
You can raise your spear, and aim it at your fear but in the dark the vision isn't clear, you have to be from your blood near, to feel the mighty gear without cutting my ear. Without sight I need it to hear. It's roaring like a bear, you can kill it if you dare. 
The silver might make you deliver the right for the giver, and the one who take will fall in the river, but when you fall the wine will steal your liver and the darkness will drown you deeper, until you look like you have seen a reaper, in the night only crows can live without coughing a fever, you always owe it to your shadow as a favor.
What?!!
There's something about to break, I can't move no matter how I shake, I only see the fake, this feeling is my make ,I am dying for god sake. 
There's a dark smoke inside of me, it's something no one will see, I hear screams from the sea, if I stand it's the warrior I'll be, but in the darkness there's no where to flee. 
The Dark is on your side to face, he's moving with no gaze ,He's always living in your vines, and giving you the chance to change.

Author's Note

there's no life in the dark only survival .there's time where life can't be seen

Reviews

[rhymeaway]

Amazing write! Loved it! The only thing I would suggest is while writing a poem,especially when it's in rhyme, it's better to keep space in between the lines. For example:
"You can raise your spear
and aim it at your fear"
gives a better effect. However,all in all, a great write :)

[MohamedBencharef]

thanks man you know I am really busy these days . I am working and studying for college . I write just in spare of the moment top and in college they teach us physics using french and I speak arabic .
the problem I didn't speak french in my life and I love english . now I am learning them both in the same time .
I write and I try to finish I don't even check if I spelled wrong . you can understand that

[rhymeaway]

Don't worry about writing. Let it come to you. You're a great poet! We're all taking efforts to get better. Be proud of yourself :)

[Ayushi Jha]

BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

[McBear]

I really see what you're trying to convey. I loved this! Well done!!!!

[MohamedBencharef]

thank you man. you always have something

[Swirlharmony]

Wow, if have experienced this darkness and you wright rom your own darkness. I could feel the presence that you speak of.
i have also written about this darkness. Thank you for sharing.

[MohamedBencharef]

thanks and welcome

[Bear]

To write in English when it is not your native language takes a brave soul, English is one of the hardest there is so I commend your bravery. I would like to give you a link to my lessons of poetry page, it has helpful hints and links to some great writing tools I hope you find useful.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/BearMage/1501893/

[MohamedBencharef]

I enjoyed reading your lessons They will come in handy

[Bear]

I hope you gave the links a try, the Grammarly link is a must have :~)