Do You think

Do you think I

Would wonder

If my heart touch my throat?

You have leaded

Me crazy

You used me as your toy

Oh my god

I loved her

she might think that am silly boy

hey you girl

just love me

and just just let me go

 

Down down there

May you lay?

Wana wana wana wana kiss your lips

Oh my baby

Am so crazy

Let's make love but let me say

 

No we don’t have

To wonder

If my heart touch my throat

You have leaded

Me crazy

You used me as your toy

 

I don't know that's was me

How come I let you made me

Was I crushed about you that much?

You pretty girl you f*****g pretty

 

Your hair

Your lips

and your eyes

They all are attractive me

to you girl

Maybe

It's your magic as girl

 

Tell me what you know about love?

Why you won't to tell me?

Do you need sometime?

If you don’t! Leave me

  

 

Do you think I

Would wonder

If you just let me go?

You have leaded

Me crazy

you used me as your toy

Hey you girl

don’t even

Think that am yours any more

I am so bad

So naughty

I make fun of this world

 

Well well well

You stop there

Hey you am not your teddy bear

It's all over

Since October

I moved on with the winter rains

 

Do you think I

Would wonder

If you just let me go?

You have leaded

Me crazy

You used me as your toy

 

I don't know that's was me

How come I let you made me

Was I crushed about you that much?

You pretty girl you f*****g pretty

 

Your hair

Your lips

and your eyes

They all are attractive me

To you girl

Maybe

It's your magic as girl

 

Tell me who am I now

If you still know me

If you don’t that's oky

I have been so lonely

Prince Mohannad

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I believe you wanted to make this into a song...by the way this reads as a lyrical verse...with the repeating stanzas throughout your work...seems this needs clarity in the lines...and the flow and read would interpret to the the reader...

[Prince mohannad]

Thanks a lot for your feed back
you are totally right about this and i will put this in my consideration in order to improve my writing

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...