Difficult

Could you be more complex to understand?

With your perfections, your imperfections,
What more must I do to show you I care,
Whatever I do, it never seems enough for you,
Whenever I reach for you, I seem to grab nothing but air.

You say you care for me,
You say you love me too.
Do you? Do you really baby?
Are any one of those words true?

You've changed so much,
I've lost you somewhere along the way.
I don't know how, I don't know where,
but without you, I cant see the light of day.

Come back to me my love,
Come back to me please.
Shall I grab the stars, or pull the moon closer for you,
I feel my heart's pulse fading, a love-lost disease..

I seem to do nothing,
But make you cry.
But in my heart I mean no harm my darling,
For you, Id paint the entire blue sky.

Please come back my angel,
I miss you so much it stings.
I'm here, waiting with my arms open for you to jump into them,
Waiting for you to open my wings...

Love you always...

Reviews

[Black]

WOw,
sho beautiful
I love the last stanza,
the words are perfectly chosen
and hichever girl you dedicate this too
you will sweeep her of her feet,

She will love you even more
but take care of the lost souls,
who only knew pain,
it will be hard to persue the once
and it will hard to be not driven away
Because they will protect theirselves,
even though you mean well

Good job writing
Black

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Very nice poem of dedicated love

[Darksummerswind]

This poem has a certain sad tone to it and makes me think of a person who no matter how hard they try, they can never impress the person that they love the most. But it also sounds like someone's also trying to apologize and win back the person that they love the most. Either way, it was very well written and I'm glad you sent this too me.

[stars are far]

i loved that soooooooo much
this is fantastic :)