Missing You

Minutes, hours, days, weeks,
Time flying by right before my face.
I feel lost, empty rather,
without you, to fill that empty space.

Where did it all go?
Those happy days, days of us smiling and giggling,
Days of us sneaking a few kisses, holding hands,
days of hearing your pure voice, beguiling.

Darkness shrouds my entire world,
skies turn from blue to gray,
A sign of you missing, apart from me,
a sign of you slowly slipping away.

Here I am, stuck in despair,
waiting eagerly for our moment, our day
when I can finally touch your gentle face,
hold you, comfort you, caress you in every way.

No one seems to understand us,
our aims, our ambitions, our dreams,
The home and children we always thought about,
our cleverly built garden schemes.

I promise on my soul my love,
I'll make all your dreams come true,
we'll cuddle in the dark, kiss in the rain,
I swear to always love you.

Just a little longer my darling,
dont let go, hold on tight,
I, your Knight in shining armor, slaying dragons and catching stars,
for our love I will fight...

Love you always...
 

Reviews

[prodicallife]

Oh my God...
That sounds so much like a smooth violin blowing near my ears audible only to me, the rest planet lying paralized evrythng is so gentel so beautiful.

each scene has got it`s own definiation with one thing in common thet is my LOVE

self explanatory with wide zone to explore

beautifull

Regards
PRODICAL

[Dark Angel ~]

I... I'm speechless... How did you...? Just... WOOOW! just... wow

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Searching a strong hold while flowing with the missisipy, nice love song.

[Tasha]

Oh my,
This really struck my heart because it was so smooth and just a blow to the ears, I would hate to hear these words and miss someone you truly care about. You really expressed the emotions well.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Darksummerswind]

This plucked at a string in my heart and reminded me of what fighting for love actually is. It shows how someone has to hold on to something they love in order to make it through the darkest days. It was straight to the heart and explored the emotion of love and loss. Please continue to create these poems and go with your heart. (Sorry if I sound a bit cheesy but this is just what I feel).

[Siddharth T]

Black , starsarefar : thank you very much! glad you liked it

[stars are far]

OMG..
This is amazing i loved that a lot , and really great perfect no more words to describe how much i loved that :)

[Black]

i love it...
i can relate..
it is so sad..
and tender,
and beautiful at the same time!

[Siddharth T]

prodicallife: thank you!