Hope

How would it feel,
if everything went our way, not a concern to bother us,
If everything we dream about came true,
if everyone who's against our love crumbled,
if the entire world contained just us two..

How would it be,
if we could have our way always,
if we could be together without worrying,
if we could cuddle under the showers,
and lock our lips without hurrying..

Soon my angel, it will be just you and I,
No body to tell us what to do,
Nobody to hold us back from each other,
No force preventing me from you..

Take my hand and hold it tight,
We'll fly far far away, grab on,
To a place for us to let our love grow,
I'll keep you warm, safe, thereupon..

I'll keep you near my heart, where you belong,
In my arms, Ill cuddle you close,
I wont ever let you go,
Your body and mine, juxtaposed..

Soon, its all gonna come true baby,
I'll make sure it does,
Hold my hand, don't let go,
you'll be mine always my sunshine, just because...

Love you sweetheart...
 

Reviews

[Black]

its
Ill keep you warm, safe, thereupon..
I'll :D

the same here
Ill keep you near my heart, where you belong,
and the next sentence too.
hm?
what is
Your body and mine, juxtaposed..
Juxtaposed?

i really liked it further.
i hope you have a love like that
i wish it for everyone,
good job on your flow and emotions

[Siddharth T]

Darksummerswind : Thank you very much....

[Darksummerswind]

Beautiful, just beautiful.

[Siddharth T]

giggle..

it means side by side..

[Black]

i just dont know the word :P prolly my fault :D

[Siddharth T]

Thanks Black! But I seem to misunderstand what the problem is with 'juxtaposed'? Can you please explain what is the error there?