Agnostic Me

My beliefs

 

Agnostic Me

despite what you may think
i have my own personal relationship
with God
no i do not go to any one of his
conveniently placed houses of worship
but i know that He hears me
and it's not only when i call on Him
when i'm feeling at my lowest point
no,
it's not only when i call on Him to
watch over my loved ones
i can sit on my bed and start dialogue
at anytime day or night just when i want
to feel His presence
so keep your theories about me being confused
to yourselves
i don't need to choose a certain path in order
to show Him my love and devotion
and what gives you the right to dictate where
my soul will go when i've breathed my last
breath
i want to listen in on the other end of this
"special" line you have to God while he dictates His
will as you've ordained yourself His personal secretary
He created us all in his image so just as He can
tell who has Him in their hearts and who truly
believe in His work
God also has the ability to refuse entrance into
His Kingdom the false prophets who spread His word
while breaking The Commandments
it isn't i who need to be reminded-maybe it is
you

Reviews

[Iota]

I don't think I am agnostic but I truly relate to this poem. I have been frustrated with what I call the over believers who are really the blind leading the blind. It kills me the double standard some live by as they pass judgments and their personal values onto others in the name of God. Religion is one reason I embrace freedom of speech so strongly. If it was left up to them, we all would be silenced on this website. Anyway I have strong opinions on this subject and I don't want to rant. See how good this poem is? It got me to give a speech LOL

[Skye Jules]

I can definitely relate to this as I am agnostic myself and your poem rangs true in every direction possible. Applauds!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A powerful write indeed - love the graphic. Thank you for sharing this - there is much to be learned by your forthright nature. Thanks again. A wonderful read.
Light,
Siddartha