Laying it on the line

Laying it on the line

A Poem by Jacqueline
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To the point

"

 

 

Laying it on the line

 

Are you sure

you want to be with

me

 

Is your heart pure

Can you love unconditionally

 

I’ve never lied

about whom I was inside

You have a lot to

endure loving me…

© 2008 Jacqueline


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short and laid out on the line. I really like this simple little piece because really it is so complicated. We feel like people have do endure us, take us in, like we are too much for people. When do we start asking ourselves Am i sure I want to be with you? I especially like this piece because I relate to the feeling. At least how I interpreted it I do. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Jacqueline
Jacqueline

Mineola, NY



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