Revenge and Hatred Colored Heart

Title says it all

 

 

Revenge and Hatred Colored Heart

 

I see you in my dreams

Your eyes I can’t forget

The tears I shed for you

Burn so bad it scars my

Face

 

I can’t believe I trusted you

I gave my all to you

So naïve for me to believe

You’ve said “I love you…”

Kissing my forehead after giving

You head

Hi-fiving your friends afterwards

 

Pictures made the rounds from camera phone

To camera phone-

Someone anonymous sent me a copy…

 

Now I know why I get teased in the

Hallways

Locker to locker, girls laugh

Every guy thinks I’m trash

I found a $20 bill with a phone number-

Some guy wanted a hummer

 

My reputation is dirt

So you must feel my hurt

Stalk you I will

From one keg party to another

Feeding many girls bullshit lines

You must pay for your horrible

Crimes

 

In the dark I’ll hide

Until you come outside

Grab your friends and they can all

Join in

Pointing at Miss Pathetic

Until I pull out my gun

No one is able to run

Feel the chrome against your temple

Aw…are you starting to tremble

 

Tears flow down your face

Seems like we were in the same place

On your knees please

Open your mouth:

Get ready for the moneyshot when my

Finger squeezes…

 

SQUIRT!

 

Only water, dumbass

You’ve gone and pissed your pants

Chuckles rumble through the crowd

Look who’s laughing now.

 

A new picture will make the rounds

Reviews

[Travis Lawrence]

Comedic at parts, but serious too. I feel awful for the speaker, even though she got her revenge, that would be a bad thing to have happen. Well organized and suspensful, a nice story in the form of poetic verse!

[Jet Lag]

congrats on your winning the unvalentine's contest!

[Carla (trying to make e..]

this was a very well written and powerful piece.I loved it.
thanks for entering my contest.
Carla

[KONSHU]

Holy...this is not what I expected. It shouts from the beginning and grows louder with each verse until the final one. Then it laughs mockingly, showing who the real power is. I'm truly stunned at the line this follows and the destination. Powerful and frightening, great work. My best to you. PEACE!!!