Away

Away

A Poem by Jacqueline
"

I've left writing and I'm not sure if I'll be welcomed back

"
The keyboard made the letters scramble
I spend my days rambling,
Making little sense

I practice my prose to a
Nonexisting audience-
No clapping for the struggling performer

Words I've used as a whip in the past
No longer
Has its sting

It's flaccid and weak
The caliber of the conversations I speak
Has dropped low

Will I ever be half the person I used to be
One never
Knows

© 2015 Jacqueline


Author's Note

Jacqueline
To say I'm rusty is an understatement

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Gee
That ain't rusty that's shining......
Nice Jacqueline

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your scrambled keyboard makes perfect sense to me.
and your whipped words still have sting.
As someone recently wrote to me..."glad your writing again, so much we would have missed"

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Bar-Keeper's-Friend leaves a lustre to glow - chuckling here, welcome back?

The day a poet can't ramble is just another sad day in existence... ya know?



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing is lost, the fire is still banked up just waiting for you to change your mind that it's absent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Welcome back! You certainly still have a few words left in your whip!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 8, 2015
Last Updated on October 8, 2015
Tags: Poetry, freestyle

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Jacqueline
Jacqueline

Mineola, NY



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I'm a mother, girlfriend, writer, bar friend keeper and gadgethound. I'm on Facebook, Twitter, Pinterest, Tumblr and more. Trying to shake the rust off more..

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