Variations of LIght

The title will most likely be changed later.

Blazing Glory

Such a short story

like the sun, its rays a passing pleasure

No use chasing that treasure

Stunning obscurity

There will be actions of impurity

Luna's darkness enthralls all

Fear, uncertainty, to all, shall befall

From a serf to a valorous paladin

riding Azure horses for the golden Vatican

fearing Luna reveals his vice

Man created the lightbulb, in cowardice

However,  upon seeing dawn

With a smile, Man will falsely clap on

Not in amazement, but in comforting joy

knowing the Sun shall always deploy

His swift armies of gallant light

every morning, conquering the dwindling moon

So that Luna may not be too long a sight

her obscurity, now strewn

So that illusions of security and virtue may spawn

As the paladin boldly charges for what he believes to be true,

while his sword is drawn.

Reviews

[lydie]

This is probably your best pome, in my opinion. It is really great and the rhymes don't seem forced or anything, and it flows well. Well done!

[Emily]

Very nice wording!
Keep on writing!!