Exposition of the Undead, Part 1A Story by mnicorataBack in the present day, I concentrate on the backstory of the group of vampire hunters, how they were all introduced to this vampire plague.Hector His
friend constantly pounded on the door with both hands. The sweat beaded down the sides of his
temples. Tension broke through his
muscles as he tried to break down the basement door but to no avail. He had to make it down there because he knew
what was on the other side had to be an abomination of some kind. For the last couple of nights, he thought
something had been off. Something
menacing was wreaking havoc when ignored his friend’s warning. He tried to prepare for what might happen next,
but he shrugged it off like a stupid rant coming from a dear friend. Let alone he was here now and what his friend
had told him came true. Oh, how we
wished he could take it back calling his best friend a moron. The door
refused to budge due to an object wedged between the basement doorframe. This made him question only one thing, the
basement was never locked from that end.
The only way one could lock it was from the back door hallway which was
between the kitchen and the family room.
There was no possible way for anyone to lock it. Unless they were something else, something
sinister and wicked and not of this world keeping him from getting down there. Someone…anyone…could have come in and
installed a deadbolt from the inside out.
This thought only made the horror intensify beyond recognition. He could
hear the panting behind the bolted door and stormed out the back door towards
the garage. Stumbling over some boxes
containing his mother’s pots and pans, and his dad’s pictures of his family, he
opened his old man’s workbench. He
grabbed a saw and the crowbar, dusting off any access debris, but in this case,
it wasn’t necessary and wondered why he would do such a thing. I guess that’s how he was raised to respect
other people’s property; it was something his dad instilled in him ever since
grammar school. Scurrying
back inside his home he stopped in his tracks.
A putrid rotting smell scorched his nostrils as if inhaling battery
acid. His eyes began to tear, feeling a
sense of morbid tenacity grow. It began
to grow heavy as if he couldn’t breathe.
The constant fear rattled his brains through and through. He thought he noticed another person in the
window that was stationed above the back porch, but when he shook his head, the
vision subsided. No one could be inside
the house, at least he didn’t think so.
He didn’t remember if he left the front door open let alone any windows
the night before. And why would there be
a person in his house? Unless it had
been one of them that his friend warned him about. But there was no time for that now, the only
important thing was to get his parents out of the basement, and fast. When he
reached the basement door he tried using the crowbar. Digging the point end between the door and
the frame and put all of his weight into it.
The force of his body met with pushback from the other side. Someone slammed the wooden door which made it
buckle and splinter a little. A silent
laugh came from the other side and it made him furious, “You leave them alone,
a*****e! You hear me!” But still the cackling laugh echoed and he
swore whoever was behind the door was smiling with devilish intent. That was
when he heard a window break coming from the family room. He didn’t know what to do except to arm
himself with the crowbar he had in hand.
The house became deathly silent even a pin drop would have remorse. The sounds coming from the basement subsided
as the sound of his parents and whoever held them captive downstairs barely
uttered a peep. It was almost as if time
stood still, and his lungs heaved in and out sporadically. If there was tension and fear before now it
doubled in its veracity. That putrid
smell was back coming in full force as he held the crowbar as a batter would at
home plate. He tried
not to make a sound as he tiptoed into the interior of the kitchen, jutting his
eyes around the corner to see if he could notice the assailant that made the
noise. Gripping the crowbar tightly, his
knuckles began to pulse with anger.
Whoever it may be was going to get a crowbar across the jaw, just
imagining it becoming dislodged put a smile on his face. His footsteps were as silent as the cavernous
echoes of the nothingness surrounding him.
This time it was personal, and the only thought radiating through his
busy head was “I should have listened to my friend. He knew I was in danger, and I didn’t
listen. If all this had to happen, it
should have happened to me and not my parents.’ Just as
soon as the thought ended a man exploded out his adjacent bedroom. A bunch of old high school papers came flying
out behind him as well as a desk chair which was thrown against the width of
the kitchen at a supernatural speed.
Whoever this was he was big, at least a foot taller with brooding
shoulders, and the arms of a linebacker.
Long curled hair trailed down the sides of his contorted face and his
grin was menacing in appearance. The man
wore a jacket a greaser would wear back in the day, and a solid white tee shirt
stained with blood lumbered towards him.
As big as he was, his speed did not match his size and he pinned the
frightened young man against the wall with a jolted-out arm. The
other man swung the crowbar at this leviathan of a man if one would call him
that. He went for his face but just
managed to hit his upper chest, the crowbar merely bouncing off it as if the
intruder was made of iron. That was when
he felt his arm toss him against the room, his back landing on the oven where
his mother cooked great dinners. His
back gave out as if being crushed by an unstoppable force. The assailant hulked over to the young man
and wrapped his glove-like paws around his throat. Picking him up like was nothing but a rag
doll, he dragged him over to the refrigerator and slammed him against the cold
ice dispenser. The young man let out a
big ‘umph’ as he felt himself being treated nothing more than a kid throwing a
tantrum for not getting what he wants. “You’re
not going anywhere pal,” this husky assailant belted out drool cascading down
his lips, “You are going to watch what we do your parents. And then afterwards will bleed you dry. Either you turn and become one of us, or you
die. Your choice, not mine. It’s what she wants.” The
young man, bruised and beaten, felt the blood trickle down his face. His body seemed like it was pummeled by a
steam truck, and this truck was not slowing down. The assailant’s breath hovered over his face,
and he could see two pearly white fangs jolting out of his mouth where his two
molars should be, “I don’t even know what you’re talking about. I did nothing wrong. Please just let my dad and mom go. They are the only two people in my life.” The
hulking behemoth chuckled under his foul breath. The young man could have he swore he saw his
eyes flash a reddish hue, “You honestly think we…I will let you live after what
you heard. We know who you talked
to. We know what information was said to
you. And besides, your friend killed my
maker, my master. He should have never
told you what he did…and now you know too much.
For that alone, you must be punished,” his lips curled into a
devastating grin, “…and anyone who you care about.” As if a
bolt of lightning streaked across the sky, he saw the monster of man grow
still. Paralysis kicked in as he saw the
assailant’s eyes glaze over and turn pasty white. Blood began to flow form his mouth as this
large man began to cough and gurgle. He
looked down to the assailant’s chest and a saw piece of metal jolting out where
his heart should be. The end of metal
rod came to a fine point, and the young man caught a whiff of garlic that
permeated the air. The hulking assailant
came down to his knees as his grip loosened upon the young man and he felt face
forward upon the linoleum floor. He slid
down the opaque refrigerator door as he stared up at his friend. Philip stood there, as short as he was, he
never looked so tall in his lifetime.
Philip kneeled down next to his friend, hands bloody, his chest heaving
up and down, his hair slackened back with sweat, his shirt torn and mangled as
if someone took a knife and ripped it open, “You okay, Hector?” The
young man named Hector smiled in relief seeing his friend smirk back at him,
“Yeah…I’m okay,” Hector breathed just as heavy as his old high school friend,
“I should have listened to you. I
thought you were just talking out of your a*s when you mentioned vampires…how
you staked Henry in his grave…how your sister died…how you killed one in a
church down on 47th street.
It sounded like you were crazy.” “Let’s
go save your parents, we’ll talk about it later,” Philip curled his arm around
his friend’s armpit and pulled him up to his height. Hector’s hands shook in place knowing he had
to get his bearings straight. The
thought of his parents began to haunt him again. For a while the image of them left as he
stared into the eyes of the tall brooding assailant. He thought his life was ending and for a
second, he was going to take the offer, he thought maybe his parents and
himself dying would make that horror go away.
But logic and reality came reeling back in when his friend guided him to
the kitchen table. Even though what just
happened defied any semblance of reason.
His mind raced back and forth trying to make sense of what happened. Philip
tossed a large duffel bag onto the table unzipping it. Hector blindly stared at the contents inside,
a hammer and mallet, a machete, four or five wooden stakes, a fire axe, two
long iron stakes that looked as if they were brought from a hardware store, a
string of garlic flowers possibly from a grocery store, and a single kukri
blade that shined silvery like the moon pouring in from the kitchen
window. Hector canted his head towards
his friend in bewilderment, still not sure whether to take him seriously or if
he was just making all of this up. Then again,
he never thought he would have been ruffed up from a vampire that was the size
a football player and shocked by the unknown grizzly whisper that came from the
basement holding his parents’ hostage.
And for what reason? For what his
best friend since high school revealed to him?
Was it true that he knew too much already that he had to be
silenced? And why would any of this
involve his parents? At what cost? What did any of this mean? “Like I
said…” Philip stuttered a little as he placed one of the cast iron stakes in
Hector’s palm, “They come after anyone you love and care for. They are the first ones to die, and it plays
on your mind.” “I never
thought vampires would exist in the first place,” Hector willingly took the
stake and gripped it tightly, his knuckles coming to red blisters, “I’m going
down there and kill whoever this guy is.
But you must help me bust down the basement door.” They
both smiled at each other, Philip eagerly taking his duffle bag in his hand and
wrapping it around his shoulder. Hector
and Philip stood a couple of meters down the hallway where the basement door
resided. Hector backed up and nice and
slow, and Philip bent down getting into a ramming position. Hector held up his fingers at his friend
signifying a countdown. Three fingers
held up, two went down, then one, afterwards they sprinted at the door full
force. Both lunged towards the wooden
barrier between them and whatever the hell was down there. The hinge and frame buckled underneath their weight,
and it loosened temporarily, “One more, buddy,” Philip groaned as they backed
towards the starting position at the kitchen entranceway. This time there wasn’t even a countdown, his
best friend was in complete synchronization.
They practically vaulted this time holding nothing back, both Hector and
his long-time friend charged the door.
The two hinges popped out making sounding like a magnum fired, and the
frame cracked under the pressure of the two friend’s shoulders. Hector
ignored the debris that they created and stormed down the basement stairs as if
he was taking off in a jet plane. Rushing
down the steps he stopped in his tracks as he saw something not of this earth
huddling over his mother. Red bleak eyes
glared back at him the moment he laid eyes on the creature. It did not look human or even contain human
traits. Its hands were in the form of
wolf’s paws, its hair stringy and unkempt, marrow dripped from his open jaw. The thing cackled as the tall assailant from
upstairs. Philip made his way down the
steps and came to his friend’s side.
That was when the creature spoke. “You are
too late, scaredy cat,” the creature licked his lips devilishly, “Your mother
is dead, and your father is next.” Philip’s
eyes came to rest on the body passed out in the corner of the basement. He was strewn out by the television set where
he and his friend would play video games into the wee hours of night. How many times they had snuck down here to
get drunk off a six pack they brought at the gas station down the street? All the memories they shared when Hector made
him listen to bands from his father’s stereo that he was remotely interested
in. All those good times they
experienced back in high school all wiped away just from what he mentioned to
his friend. His dad’s chest heaved
sporadically, he could see his best friend’s father choking and gasping for
air. “You
leave my dad alone, you sick son of a b***h!” Hector ran at the creature full
force, his arm winding back into a swinging punch. The creature rose to its full height and swatted
at him like a fly. His pawed shaped hand
landed squarely in his chest sending him backwards into Philip and his friend
caught him in a bear hug. They both
panted at the same time as they just waited for the creature to make its way
towards them. Their eyes came to rest on
the creature’s red pools of crimson terror, one pair that was hazel, the other
one brown. Philip harrowingly whispered
into his best friend’s ear, the one who always had his back and then some, “We
do this together.” He patted his
friend’s hand that still carried the stake in his left hand. Hector’s eyes wavered over to his long-time
friend’s wrist only to see he was holding the machete that came from the duffle
bag. The
creature growled and barked like a ferocious blood hound and leapt towards the
two young men. Hector slid over to one
side and Philip the other. The creature
as strong as the previous one might have had the strength, but he did not think
things through. Philip swung the machete
at the creature’s throat as it pounced in the direction. That gave Hector enough time to push the
creature back against the concrete wall of the basement. Even though he had to put his weight into it,
he was reminded of the basement door and put all his strength into his
shoulders. Philip took another large
swing at the untamed beast, this type cutting his right forearm which
immediately sprouted blood from the gaping wound. “The
heart man, go for the heart!” Philip
explained. Without hesitation the cast
iron stake in his hand felt so light as the adrenaline kicked in. Hector’s arm cocked back as if throwing a
baseball and slammed the piercing edge of stake right into the creature’s
chest. Philip took the machete and drove
it into the beast’s shoulder blade where it lodged itself right into the
cartilage. He didn’t even bother to yank
it out, he wanted this vampire to suffer for the mistakes he made. Hector pushed with all his weight as he saw
the iron stake disappear into the rest of his chest, barely noticing the handle
anymore that he gripped tightly. “Die,
you undead a*****e!” Hector screamed in
the vampire’s face as he saw his eyes turn the same white as the assailant
upstairs. He noticed that that whatever
life this thing had before it was being expelled right before him. Steam began to arise from the incision he
made, almost feeling the iron burn his own hand as he just stood there
screaming in the creature’s face. Slowly
but surely the vampire began to pant and wheeze. Philip knew what was happening, he had seen
this before. He understood the ritual
was not yet complete and he violently took out the axe from the duffle bag he
tossed on the ground when he first came down the basement stairs. “No man,
don’t!” Hector just stood there
nonchalantly, rocking back and forth as in some type of adrenaline-fueled
haze. He couldn’t see straight anymore;
anger fueled his senses as hatred came over him. His hands started to shake again, and the
perspiration came in droves. He looked
like a crazed man as he turned his head towards Philip, “I have to do it, not
you.” Philip
nodded not in admiration but courage. He
handed his best friend the axe he had used twice before but he dared not tell
Hector what this was going to lead to.
Hector gulped as he took the axe in both hands, his hands tightened just
as with the stake. Philip wished he
could have done this for him but his friend was right, at the end we all must
do what is necessary out of our own volition.
He took a step back and just stared blankly at his good friend, the one
who taught him about girls when they were just freshman in high school. He never liked this part; it was the same
type of hell he went through as when he killed his sister. It had to be done. Hector brought the axe back and this time he
waited only a split second and took one gigantic swing. There was no need for a second, something
Philip could never have done because he knew his friend was much stronger than
he, and much more enraged than he would have thought. The
creature’s head tumbled and came to rest on the tiled floor. Hector remembered when he was younger, he
helped his dad fix the basement. His
memories of putting up the drywall, nailing the two-by-fours, making sure every
tile was lain down in grammatical patterns, all disappeared when Hector peered
down at the vampire’s head. Philip
noticed the disdain in his friend’s face as his eyes came to rest on his dad in
the corner. Hector ignored what he had
done, and his heart grew black just even thinking about it. They both stumbled over to his dad who was
curled up into a ball. His hands were
oily, and his face appeared flush. His
eyes looked like two hollow orbs not even noticing who was here or what was
going on. He seemed to be drained. “Dad?” Hector bent over his father, shaking his
shoulders as if to wake him up out of a long sleep. Philip worried, he understood something was
wrong, but he had never seen anything like this before. He tilted Hector’s dad neck to one side and
noticed a big open hole with no blood escaping or pooling on the floor. Hector’s jaw dropped, dumbstruck from what
happened. The creature lied. He had killed him and his mother, and that is
when he knew this was never going to stop.
The only person that he could trust was his friend who decided to put an
arm around his shoulder. “I never
seen anything like this. I’m sorry.”
Philip spoke quietly. He knew his friend
needed time to grieve. He looked over
his shoulder at Hector’s mother and noticed the same thing upon her neck. This made absolutely no sense to Philip. This was unlike what happened to his sister,
Sarah. She gradually turned into one of
these things in only a matter of days.
He thought he had all the answers, but this led him into another series
of questions. “He…or
they did this deliberately. These
creatures wanted my parents to suffer.
They wanted me to suffer from what you told me. I think they must have treated them like a
couple of puppets. Just drained them
until there was nothing left. No blood
to give them life, that’s why they look so empty…so hollow,” Hector began to
cry, stood up, and started to calmly walk across the basement to the stairs. “We must
take care of their bodies. We can’t just
leave them like this. Especially your
parents.” Hector’s
eyes darted to his friend as he waltzed up the stairs as in some maddened
reverie, “What’s the point? There is
nothing here for me anymore, absolutely nothing. You were right, I should have believed
you. You told me to be careful and I wasn’t. You warned me and I didn’t listen.” And he briskly walked up the steps into the
kitchen and heard his friend pull out one of chairs at the kitchen table and
sit. Philip
made his way upstairs into the finely decorated kitchen that looked like a scene
out of a horror movie. Pots and pans
scattered across the floor; a pile of newspapers sprawled out as if in some
kind of detective scenario. The
refrigerator door had a big dent on the side and the nearby bedroom door
remained wide open letting in a cool breeze from where the assailant must have
broken through to crawl inside. He sat
adjacent to his friend at the table and they both sat there not saying anything
for a couple of minutes. “Listen
I know what you’re going through right now, Hector,” Philip tried to make light
of the situation but dropped the cold hard truth afterwards, “But we have to
dispose of the bodies. And not just the
creatures but your parents too. We can
find a place somewhere far away so no one could find them. I did that with Sarah, and I believe…I think
she might be in a better place because of it.” “You
think?” Hector had a snarky attitude towards his friend, “I don’t think she
is. And neither are my parents. I think what happened was my parents got
tortured for what I chose to ignore and pretended it was just fantasy. My parents paid the price for my
stupidity. What am I supposed to do
now? Just forget any of this ever
happened and go back to work come Monday?” “No,”
Philip became stern from his friend’s sarcasm, “I want you to help me. I want…I need you to be my side in all of
this. Whatever this mystery is I want to
unravel it. I knew my sister made a
deal, or a pact, or made friends with the wrong people. I think that is why my sister started to
become one of them and your parents did not.
I had to kill my sister because I knew what she was becoming. I didn’t know at first but after what I’ve
been through, I’m still learning. I am
still trying to figure out about the vampire I killed in that abandoned
church. I think, maybe, my sister made a
deal with him. Maybe he was a friend of
hers from when she was younger, maybe he was once human, or they both did
something to invite this curse in. I
just do not know. That’s why I have been
gone for a long time because I am still trying figure out this mystery. I shouldn’t have told you everything but you
were the only person I could trust. I
never thought anything bad would happen.” “Well,
it did. And now what are we going to do
about it?” “Join
me, Hector. I can’t do this alone. If I do you might find my name in the
obituaries in the Sun Times one day. I
could use the help in tracking these things.
We can do this together and we are much stronger in numbers against those
creatures down there,” Philip casually pointed towards the basement and Hector
chuckled under his breath, “You are right, there is nothing left for you
here. I agree with you, so…what are we
going to do? You’re good with computers
and finding out information. You have
always been a good researcher into conspiracy theories, Roswell, and all those ‘behind
the scenes’ topics. I can show you how
to hunt and locate these things. I can
show you how to fight the undead and we can do it together as friends.” Hector
looked down at the basement then back at his friend. His arms leaned against the kitchen table and
Philip caught his friend’s sly grin.
That same old look he had when he showed Philip how to ask a girl out in
high school, “You know what I think?”
Philip casually smiled in his best friend’s direction, “Show me how to
hunt these undead creatures, and I can find out information where they might be
hiding and where they come from. If we
do this together, we can kill a hell of a lot these immortal pricks. But what happened here tonight and what
happened to you, that’s between you and me.
I don’t want anything to get out of hand, so we keep our mouths shut and
our eyes wide open. This type of hell
should stay confined, and I do not want it spread out anywhere else.” Philip nodded and shook his friend’s hand in
unison. They both agreed on whatever
this darkness was would lead into a deeper mystery that could be contained and
it was up to them to connect the dots. At
that very moment their friendship grew twice as strong as they both pondered on
the agony they both experienced, never wishing for their trauma to ever fall
into the wrong hands. © 2024 mnicorata |
StatsAuthormnicorataLockport, ILAboutI graduated college back in 2007, and originally my major had been in engineering because my entire life I have always been good at math and sciences in general. Then I found out that it was a very de.. more..Writing
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