Ultimate Stargaze

A poem I wrote describing the ethereal, epic, cosmic space cosmos.

Glorifying the entire galaxy
Into one gigantic mystery
as we scream and dance out of hand
The mystery and the magic
Triumphant and the tragic
who gazes at a symphonic band
Tilting the world so true
Phasing in and out of glue
cycles that I seem not to understand

The wheels keep on turning
And fires keep on burning
Grazing upon the world unknowing
Grinding on the never ending flow

Till the cycle keeps on its steady course
Recognizing the tumults fearsome force
Into moons we dare not to show

Into the array of silence
We show our immaculate string
As we glide into the mystery
Of some web into blindness

Holy departure, satisfied ends
Magnum eraser, selfish trends
Glancing into the clashing days
Setting the course upon our ways

Flow after flow, we are on the breeze
Beckoning forward till tomorrow
Sorrows begin to fill the till
As we settle into the empty strays

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

Glorifying the entire galaxy
Into one gigantic mystery
as we scream and dance out of hand

The mystery and the magic
Triumphant and the tragic
who gazes at a symphonic band

Tilting the world so true
Phasing in and out of glue
cycles that I seem not to understand

The wheels keep on turning
And fires keep on burning
Grazing upon the world unknowing
Grinding on the never ending flow

Till the cycle keeps on its steady course
Recognizing the tumults fearsome force
Into moons we dare not to show

Into the array of silence
We show our immaculate string
As we glide into the mystery
Of some web into blindness

Holy departure, satisfied ends
Magnum eraser, selfish trends
Glancing into the clashing days
Setting the course upon our ways

Flow after flow, we are on the breeze
Beckoning forward till tomorrow
Sorrows begin to fill the till
As we settle into the empty strays

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I believe this is how the format was suppose to look...but I could be wrong...again the feel and undertone of this write like your others has the elements in the way you convey your words...I'll have at another and move on...