Feeling.

Feeling.

A Poem by mmzx
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Not rhyming words even. Just letting you know what's in my heart, heavy heart.

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You know the feeling when you get butterflies,

and you yearn to get on the computer to check your page.

To see if he replies or give some sort of sign.

Being anxious and happy at the same time.

 

When you swore a few weeks ago that you wouldn't,

couldn't and just.. wouldn't like a guy for just a year.

And then this guy comes along and started with a Hi.

Then it all started and you're there, waiting for it to happen.

 

- This is TOTALLY not needed -

I am wasting space. Oh me.

© 2010 mmzx


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A playful rendition of being in love. Lovely. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's not really a waste of space.. It's like a draft of a song,, or story.. It's interesting and a fun write ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I thought it had lots of rhyming words, and it reminded me of summertime. Like I dunno. It was cute too. Its nice to read poetry and feel life at that special angle. This did that for me.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful and fun poem that I think is so true to many. And you described the feeling really well. Loved this piece :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a very sweet and lovely piece, and it's almost 8am here right as I write this review, and I can honestly say even though it's cloudy and rainy out right now, this poem brightened up my morning.

GREAT JOB.

-Richard

Posted 15 Years Ago


Aww... I liked it very very much!!! It was very beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 10, 2009
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mmzx
mmzx

Singapore



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I go by the name Munn. I am 16, I think. I like poetry writing. I like reading quotes. I like acoustic music. Also, I like you. more..

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