It's not me.

It's not me.

A Poem by mmzx
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Randomly dedicated to a soul out there.

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The more you talked to her about me,
the more miserable i feel.
I dont know whats happening inside me,
my sense of feeling gush through my soul.

I guess you don't know what's happening,
how deep my love for you.
My friends say move on.
but everybody knows the truth.

Every word i read,
engulf me in sickness.
When they say words can kill,
they weren't lying.

© 2009 mmzx


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This is really neat.
I like the edge in this.
Excellent write.
-Elissa :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Definitely a feeling that I've felt before. The last stanza was awesome, and I especially loved the title of this.
I loved the last 2 lines as well:
When they say words can kill,
they weren't lying.

Great job,
~PaperHearts

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can relate with you on this one. I wish I knew the story. This is a wonderful write. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


awe, i wish i knew the story beind this because it seems sad and i can relate to it. I hope everything and anything that you will gwet thru this just lke im trying to.
good job and keep it up.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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mmzx
mmzx

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