cool night sentiments first love

fragments

magic muffin, where's home
to feel relief; a mold for my feet
to rest in peace; underwater swim in
deep still dark blue lake of a warm womb
birds chirping, puppies passing by
its night time.
 "I miss you"
the feeling is missing
Where I am?

Reviews

[Mackenzie Brooke]

I actually think this is a nice little poem by itself however its your poem so you need to do what you like with it. Nice work though :)