Cannibals, we rise.

Lungs to ashes,

acid in the bones.

Bruised fingers,

an artery with

a hole.

Skin from their bones,

swallow them

whole.

Author's Note

it's short. I'm sorry.

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

Amaazing!

[Hello, Goodbye]

fantastic usage of brevity and the imagery is complete in its captivation.. it is what it is, and that is indeed enough..

[Calypso]

Great flow

[d]

i think this is way longer than you admit. i'm always fascinated by what you write. that is, though i've only read a few things, i keep finding myself thinking about what it is that you have in mind. i think making someone feel that way is a very important thing to do when writing.

[Dragon]

Short is fine. Through the descriptions you give me, I can really see the forms and the dissolvings (if that makes any sense to you). This is a great write. Good job. :)

[Lily Mae]

The picture that came into my head was strange.. which is good because that means you did a great job describing what you wanted. :) xx

[Jack E Khthon]

real short..