Blue lips, purple bones.
A Poem by
blue blue blue.
Break her bones, break them!
Don't you cry, don't you make a f*****g sound.Sob. What was that?Crack, crack. Just a bone, maybe two.Haha, you little b***h. I'm gonna teach you, I'm gonna teach your a*s real good. Scream for me. Scream, scream, scream, scream, scream. I said scream. Louder.Whip. Louder, damnit!schh. Don't! Don't! How can he be stopped?e! You've got such pretty blood. let me see some more.slice. slice. whip. e! More! You've got such nice bones, little cracks like spider webs. Those dark marks on your arms. so pretty, so pretty. Finger prints around your neck they only add to your beauty. That crack right along your spine give me your purple bones you are my sacrifice.little girl, with veins so blue. they'll rip them right out of you and consume them, to end their feast.
© 2011 blue blue blue.
Author's Note
It progresses, I suppose...? I'm not quite sure what this is. I wasn't really in the mood to write, but I kind of got into it towards the end.
Reviews
This is interesting. It brings to mind several different ideas:
-abusive spouse or significant other
-slave owner
-sadistic serial killer
I love the appeal to senses, the imagery, and the way the words, all about physical events, are so full of emotion.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Chilling imagery. Creative horror piece.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Chilling imagery. Creative horror piece.
i don't want to say "great" or other great things because i think this is such a delicate issue. but it is really to the point i think, and it makes one wish one could somehow intervene and put a stop to the pain. but getting between whom and whom is the question which brings me back to the delicate issue. i will ponder and consider for quite a while.
Posted 13 Years Ago
i don't want to say "great" or other great things because i think this is such a delicate issue. but it is really to the point i think, and it makes one wish one could somehow intervene and put a stop to the pain. but getting between whom and whom is the question which brings me back to the delicate issue. i will ponder and consider for quite a while.
dark, morbid, criminal, lol, you have a wicked mind...cool write on the right...hahaha
Posted 13 Years Ago
dark, morbid, criminal, lol, you have a wicked mind...cool write on the right...hahaha
This is twisted and sick, but only adds to its dark beauty. The rhythm is almost sing-songy, nicely done...
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is twisted and sick, but only adds to its dark beauty. The rhythm is almost sing-songy, nicely done...
I really like this :D the imagery is insane and it itself is just great. I love it, just wow. Great job (:
100/100
Posted 13 Years Ago
I really like this :D the imagery is insane and it itself is just great. I love it, just wow. Great job (:
100/100
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