Blue lips, purple bones.

Blue lips, purple bones.

A Poem by blue blue blue.
"

Break her bones, break them!

"
Don't you cry,
don't you make a f*****g sound.

Sob.

What was that?

Crack, crack.

Just a bone,
maybe two.

Haha,
you little b***h.

I'm gonna teach you,
I'm gonna teach your a*s
real good.

Scream for me.

Scream,
scream,
scream,
scream,
scream.

I said scream.

Louder.

Whip.

Louder, damnit!

schh.

Don't!
Don't!

How can he be stopped?

e!

You've got such pretty
blood.

let me see some more.

slice.
slice.
whip.
e!

More!

You've got such nice bones,
little cracks like spider webs.

Those dark marks
on your arms.

so pretty,
so pretty.

Finger prints around your neck
they only add to your beauty.
 
That crack right along your spine
give me your purple bones
you are my sacrifice.

little girl,
with veins so blue.
they'll rip them
right out of you
and consume them,
to end their feast.

© 2011 blue blue blue.


Author's Note

blue blue blue.
It progresses, I suppose...? I'm not quite sure what this is. I wasn't really in the mood to write, but I kind of got into it towards the end.

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This is interesting. It brings to mind several different ideas:
-abusive spouse or significant other
-slave owner
-sadistic serial killer
I love the appeal to senses, the imagery, and the way the words, all about physical events, are so full of emotion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Chilling imagery. Creative horror piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i don't want to say "great" or other great things because i think this is such a delicate issue. but it is really to the point i think, and it makes one wish one could somehow intervene and put a stop to the pain. but getting between whom and whom is the question which brings me back to the delicate issue. i will ponder and consider for quite a while.

Posted 13 Years Ago


dark, morbid, criminal, lol, you have a wicked mind...cool write on the right...hahaha

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is twisted and sick, but only adds to its dark beauty. The rhythm is almost sing-songy, nicely done...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this :D the imagery is insane and it itself is just great. I love it, just wow. Great job (:
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 3, 2011
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