Blue lips, purple bones.

Break her bones, break them!

Don't you cry,
don't you make a f*****g sound.

Sob.

What was that?

Crack, crack.

Just a bone,
maybe two.

Haha,
you little b***h.

I'm gonna teach you,
I'm gonna teach your a*s
real good.

Scream for me.

Scream,
scream,
scream,
scream,
scream.

I said scream.

Louder.

Whip.

Louder, damnit!

schh.

Don't!
Don't!

How can he be stopped?

e!

You've got such pretty
blood.

let me see some more.

slice.
slice.
whip.
e!

More!

You've got such nice bones,
little cracks like spider webs.

Those dark marks
on your arms.

so pretty,
so pretty.

Finger prints around your neck
they only add to your beauty.
 
That crack right along your spine
give me your purple bones
you are my sacrifice.

little girl,
with veins so blue.
they'll rip them
right out of you
and consume them,
to end their feast.

Author's Note

It progresses, I suppose...? I'm not quite sure what this is. I wasn't really in the mood to write, but I kind of got into it towards the end.

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Very strong.. I can almost feel the pain and anguish as I read.. Not knowing you yet it makes one wonder if this is in anyway something you have endured . I certainly hope not . I want to read more..
thank you, shallimarRose

[Anissa Amer]

good job

[Hello, Goodbye]

dark but literary delicious..the imagery is engaging..

[Tasha]

You wrote this beautifully with dark emotions. It was a great read.

[.quan.011.]

This is a beautiful written poem. Keep it up.

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

This is a very great pice with dark imagery. Great write.

[Alessander]

That crack right along your spine
give me your purple bones
you are my sacrifice.

I think those were my fav lines. I like the format and details (though not in a sadistic way). It's a tough subject to tackle because a writer doesn't want to risk "glorifying" violence or anything, so kudos for taking it on.

However, if it weren't for your tags, I would almost get a sense that this is the darker side of S&M, which it may very well be for all I know.

[Inyourshadow]

I agree with sweetemotions this poem works on many levels from submissive erotica to abusive partnerships, you have a talent for the dark using imagery to aid your pieces well. Looking forward to others, keep em' coming

[Calypso]

I love how you had the font pushed off to the side. Great poem

[*[_Natasha_]*]

wow.... just...wow.