Purging fire
A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney
***FIRE***
Flaming feathers,
uplift our hearts.
Releasing,
tainted fears in me.
Warmth,
the coldest darkest parts.
Returning,
blessing’s unto thee.
Sprit fire,
melt this scared soul.
Becoming liquid,
purging trance.
Purified as gold,
restored, whole.
Beckoning flames,
with you I dance.
I fear not,
the flame nor the pain.
I free myself,
finally free.
Old worries,
now washed and slain.
A purged soul,
I now will be.
© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Author's Note
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Anyway you look at this, it is faultless. From the phraseology, to the flow, to the beat. Indeed, set to music it would be just as good. A superb poem, handled like a true professional
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12 Years Ago
You are so very kind. Thank you ;)
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12 Years Ago
Oh how truly spoken!
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12 Years Ago
I am so very glad you enjoyed it;)
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12 Years Ago
You are always so very kind, Thank you! The darker the day, the easier it is to see the light…it�.. read moreYou are always so very kind, Thank you! The darker the day, the easier it is to see the light…it’s all a simple matter of focus ;)
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Kimberly "Melody" CarneyDenver, CO
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