Sweet Serenity

***WIND***

 

 

Breath of life,

now consume me.

I come,

to make amend.

I see,

 the smells aside me.

My dear,

 and blessed friend.

Hear,

the colors around me.

 Soul,

 captured completely.

This Grand,

blessed sea of trees.

 Leaves,

 speak to me softly.

 

 The earth,

 slowly becomes me.

Oh,

sweet serenity.

 Oh my,

 Sweet serenity.

 Truly,

blessed within thee

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Wonderful write Melody...and though I don't usually follow instructions...I did as you asked and reread it with the music as background. A true meditational/yoga experience... I truly felt serene and at ease with the world...and boy can I ever use peace at this time...very soulful and heartfelt write Melody. rhythmic and ethereral...oozing with beautiful images.
Thanks for sharing Melody
allen

[Wild Willow Blue]

I love the music added to this, it makes it that much better. Really great read!

[MOON]

Great flow well crafted.

[Zombie Waffle]

Love the poem, but it would make it easier to follow if there was punctuation.
Overall, a nice poem - very calming.

[Sean]

A great poem!

[Laura Maidah]

perrrfect

[Jordan A. Wilson]

This is smooth and imagery it creates is soothing. Reminds me of a rainy day or a thunderstorm, both of which I personally find soothing. Don't ask why about the thunderstorms haha.

[Laura Maidah]

Contextually, you embed "in" something. It's left hanging. Otherwise, this is kind of perfect. I LOOOVE the "sea" of trees. Very interesting twist. It's almost a Wiccan prayer to the elements. It's my favorite thing I've read past midnight. Wow.

[Rae Elizabeth]

Beautiful. [:
Great write.