Sweet Serenity

***WIND***

 

 

Breath of life,

now consume me.

I come,

to make amend.

I see,

 the smells aside me.

My dear,

 and blessed friend.

Hear,

the colors around me.

 Soul,

 captured completely.

This Grand,

blessed sea of trees.

 Leaves,

 speak to me softly.

 

 The earth,

 slowly becomes me.

Oh,

sweet serenity.

 Oh my,

 Sweet serenity.

 Truly,

blessed within thee

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Wonderful write Melody...and though I don't usually follow instructions...I did as you asked and reread it with the music as background. A true meditational/yoga experience... I truly felt serene and at ease with the world...and boy can I ever use peace at this time...very soulful and heartfelt write Melody. rhythmic and ethereral...oozing with beautiful images.
Thanks for sharing Melody
allen

[Yellow Butterfly]

Such a wonderful oasis of loveliness written here, with the essence of the sound of the music captivating your audience as they submerge themselves into this beautiful piece of poetic art.

I loved this Melody :o)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you for enveloping yourself with it, as it should be.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Enveloping myself is exactly what I did... going into my favs.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you! My desire was to write a meditation style poem for each element. So far I have
Wind-Sweet Serenity
Water-Waters of Hope
Fire-Purging Fire
I was writing one for Earth and ended up writing-The Weeping Willow Will. I will write one though as it is very tranquil to write of such amazing elements.

[†Tracey†]

Feels like a perfect prayer or manifest..xo

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

As it is...;)

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Awesome write, dear poet :) I needed some sweet serenity...long day!

[Lily Mae]

As a Reiki Master I dove into your words and the music right away.. I try to let myself free everyday in my daily meditations..xo

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

thank you for allowing the flow as it was meant to be;)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

My desire is to write a poem for each of the elements; earth, water, fire, air and within everything is Spirit.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A wonderful piece that eases the reader to no end.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you for such kind words my friend.

[Donald Cole]

i enjoy this. the serenity I seek in my world is described in your words. . . this is very nice place to be. thanks for sharing....
Don

[Sir Joe]

While reading the text, I felt the sweet serenity that you're talking about (=
Nice one (=

[L. Edward Neale]

Wonderful. Very soothing. Zen and more than a little Shamanic. What a wonderful idea to put soothing music at the end of a piece. I may just have to give that a go on something of mine. Thank you for the inspiraiton.

[Sami Khalil]

Deeply poetic.

[BlueDreams]

Everyone craves to stay in serenity forever.. Sensible piece of write .. :-)