Sweet Serenity

***WIND***

 

 

Breath of life,

now consume me.

I come,

to make amend.

I see,

 the smells aside me.

My dear,

 and blessed friend.

Hear,

the colors around me.

 Soul,

 captured completely.

This Grand,

blessed sea of trees.

 Leaves,

 speak to me softly.

 

 The earth,

 slowly becomes me.

Oh,

sweet serenity.

 Oh my,

 Sweet serenity.

 Truly,

blessed within thee

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

Wonderful write Melody...and though I don't usually follow instructions...I did as you asked and reread it with the music as background. A true meditational/yoga experience... I truly felt serene and at ease with the world...and boy can I ever use peace at this time...very soulful and heartfelt write Melody. rhythmic and ethereral...oozing with beautiful images.
Thanks for sharing Melody
allen

[MandaBear]

thank you for such a wonderful write

[TheSweet]

Not much is said. But this holds somewhat of a feeling of serenity or peace. The natural world is a wonderful thing. Thanks for sharing :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Refreshing, relaxing and made me feel better..thanks :D

[EmpressPoetess]

Very soothing and serene.

[Sagar Waingankar]

Beautiful words flow with yo, wonderful video too! We are the highest possible level when we start creating a nature of our own!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

very kind words! I am humbled.

[Jibey]

A pleasing meditation. The repetition gives it a strength of purpose that focuses on the blessing sassociated with the various images you use.... A fragrant piece of writing in many ways...

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you;)

[afra]

lovely ...i enjoyed reading it ...thank you for such a wonderful write

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am so glad you enjoyed it. ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and video. I enjoyed the poetry. Description gave life to the artwork and video. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice capturing write, and pictures as well as the sound in the author's note, it all makes for a nice relaxing write. Enjoyed.

[Poetic Beauty]

It is amazing how the sound of the ocean or being there watching the waves roll up on the shore can sooth the weary soul causing serenity to wash over you.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

amazing indeed!