My Six Word Story

Watch the video...like a grain of sand in the potters hand I will always stay in perspective of where I am in this universe.

Simply Complex. Constantly Misunderstood. Totally Content.

Author's Note

like a grain of sand in the potters hand

Reviews

[Zombie Waffle]

I completely understand what you mean by the second two sentences - but the first one baffles me just a little. Is it purely that it's an oxymoron, or does the phrase itself have a hidden meaning that I'm not seeing?
Regardless, a lovely concept, well executed.

[EMF]

Perfect. Anything else, it's just words to prove I can type

[A. V. Madison]

Probably the best piece of writing I've read in awhile xD

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Thank you, very kind words.

[Tate Morgan]

Content is the key to happy .Be content everything else is a blessing

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I couldn't agree more Tate!

[Dr. Wood ?]

interesting...Must have a go....Mine will not be as deeply constructed as this though

[Ceri]

I love Hemingway's, and I love yours. The accompanying image is beautiful also, I've sat here for the last couple minutes thinking how it relates to your poem, and I've somehow come to personify the mountain as a big, hot oddball in a sea of snow, who is unexpectedly content about it. Haha :) Nice poem.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

To my dear reader unaware of the history of the six word story, here it is.

The original six word story.... In the 1920s, Ernest Hemingway’s colleagues bet him that he couldn’t write a complete story in just six words. They paid up. Hemingway is said to have considered it his best work. His six word story was as follows

For sale: baby shoes, never used.

—Ernest Hemingway

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This story is like reading a page from a book of alchemy. I felt the pleasure of seeing the creation of a soul. I enjoyed it.

[Joshua W. Harris]

Well done. There is little more to be said than that. Truly brings to light the power of the written word. For it invokes so much thought through so very little.

[Revery]

Oh, I love it. Fabulous!!!