Good to know

Never good to get lost too long inside one's self;), but it is so very fun!

 TURNING MY MIND

                      TO SEE WITHIN

                             MY EYES' ARE       

                        SC A

                              T  T  E     

                                             R E D

 FROM   COLERS     OF          EVERY         SHADE

   HOW LONG I HAVE GONE?

                                NEVER KNOWING THIS WAS HERE

A WORLD ENTICING AND NOT SO NEW

                 I FEEL THAT FEELING LOST LONG AGO 

     CREEP BACK TO ME AS THE TENSION GROWS

                                      LOST MEMORIES THAT WERE

             INTRAPPED

                   THOUGH GOOD INTANGLED WITH THE BAD

           I LOVE IT HERE                   BUT UNDERSTAND I MUST GO

     FOR I AM IN ME SO IM WITH ME

                                     FINALY

                      GOOD

                                            TO

                         KNOW….SMILE.....

                    SMILE!!!!!!!!!!

 

Author's Note

The best advice I can give to my readers is the same advice I give to my teens. Relax! Enjoy life, make mistakes, learn from them and stop dreaming long enough to give you dreams life. Put yourself out there just two feet past your comfort zone…close your eyes and free fall….that’s when you know your living!
Follow you soul, it has been around far longer than you!

Reviews

[Pax]

great structure(love the colors) and nice flow. Great message to everyone.

[Sir Joe]

Nice structure (=
Full of optimism.
You must be a very positive and cheerful person.
How I wish all people are like you.
I like the message of the poem. (=

[BLACK PRINCE]

very original

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. Easy to get twist up in memories. Thank you for excellent poem. I did like the ending. Good to smile.
Coyote