SUNNY SIDE UP

SUNNY SIDE UP

A Poem by Kimberly "Melody" Carney

SUNNY SIDE UP

OUR DAYS ARE LIKE OUR EGGS

WE ARE THE COOK

                    HARD BOILED

       poached

                               SCRAMBLED

MY CHOICES

          SUNNY SIDE UP

AND      

            EASY OVER

 

© 2012 Kimberly "Melody" Carney


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Kimberly "Melody" Carney

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short but I surely can understand the immense amount of thought you have put to while writing this great piece...not many can derive lessons from the daily ordinary observations of life...but bravo, you did and that too so meaningful it was! specially the change in fonts-representing the message for different ways we can control our lives!outstanding!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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How adorable! I love the idea, and your portrayal was magnificent. Great piece. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


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nice thoughts Kimberly...yes we do make our days what they become...nice...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this is absolutely wonderful! Sunny side up and easy over.. such a playful use of these cooking terms- and eggs! the perfect choice! also good choice of the many fonts!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I normally don't do this but... I listened to the whole song and kept reading your poem, over and over and over and... you know what?? I think... yes, I do... feel happy! :o)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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A nice long stretched metaphor. The format really brings this to life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hi Kimberly, Clever lille piece. So we can eat our words and have a yolk or two!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow, so true. cool comparison with the eggs. good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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simple and cute, but somehow still filled with a rather large amount of depth... I can honestly say i don't know how you do it, Melody.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sunny side up and easy over, yep.... so I can enjoy the yolk! :) made me smile! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is bright good-morning poem!
Thanks for sharing!
*Love the scrambled ones*

Cheers!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on June 17, 2012
Last Updated on September 30, 2012

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Kimberly "Melody" Carney
Kimberly "Melody" Carney

Denver, CO



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