SUNNY SIDE UP

SUNNY SIDE UP

OUR DAYS ARE LIKE OUR EGGS

WE ARE THE COOK

                    HARD BOILED

       poached

                               SCRAMBLED

MY CHOICES

          SUNNY SIDE UP

AND      

            EASY OVER

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

short but I surely can understand the immense amount of thought you have put to while writing this great piece...not many can derive lessons from the daily ordinary observations of life...but bravo, you did and that too so meaningful it was! specially the change in fonts-representing the message for different ways we can control our lives!outstanding!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

good fun!

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

This really got me to thinking and made me read your poem again and again. Your font changes were effective and I love the simple aspect you gave to us readers :)

Nice write

[Pencrafter]

I like the ideas conveyed and your use of different fonts and print sizes. Especially the message that our decisions and choices will produce either good or bad in our life. Technically, I like my eggs basted well, with the yoke broken.

[.]

Great motto, to the point, and i love the way you wrote it with the different size words, very clever!

[Bobbie Coelho]

This is a very short, but brilliant poem, Melody,thank you for giving me the chance to comment.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Very much enjoyed. Yes, we are in charge of ourselves and our own choices. Great metaphor..
~pat

[.]

A truly very inspiring poem! Never give up! :)

[writer witch]

I like the idea, I just think it feels much more like a quote than a poem. I'd like to see you add a bit more description to it, talking about the eggs and how they can be like the way you choose to make your day.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

It is my quote, my motto, my sip of contentment first thing in the mornig...just wanted to share it with you.

[writer witch]

:D Thank you!

[spiritwind]

You made me laugh and I thank you for that! You took an ordinary meal and served up a little home cooking! IU like the texture of the poem with the different type settings for the egg menu. May your life always be over easy and sunny side up!