Powerful and intuitive message you describe here, and every word of it is so true. The empathy for people so stuck in the worrisome coils of their own minds, expecting the unexpectable, it's sweetly philosophical and almost tender. Also, very well written, wonderful message you've expressed. I really enjoyed reading this.
Possessives need apostrophes. But you already know that. "Mind's". I just had to reread this. It's that good. Sorry I didn't catch that before. Unless it's a plural form.
This poem is a reminder of all of the stories of those who had life changing epiphanies that came from walking alone. This deep philosophical work was a joy to read. It is art as well as practical advice which saves lives. Beautiful.
A great poem about the real meaning and true about life. You gotta push your bonderies, you gotta try hard, and if you faield, ast least you have a scar to learn from. Such great write here
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Happiness lays within your deepest core. It's for some hard to find it, when it's lost, but if you have it or have found it back, a true bliss. Very beautiful words here, and something to think about. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed.
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