Blak Rose

2 Way colab with Eclipsing Moon

The silver sifted coat of dew.

 

while cooling with sprinkles of morning light,

 

relieves the burning in my finger tips

 

Cooling my essense of desire..

 

to find and share the Rose ...

 

with black petals,and unthorned..

 

Breaking day does not thwart...

 

essense of this quest.

 

Ages old and eons sung,

 

Of a rose so fair, black,

 

 and..minus barbs ...

 

with which to ensnare,

 

hand and heart of lover true.

 

divine be the day I find

the rarest rose of all

for with its petals a spell

be cast upon my lovers heart

 

and all shall be as it should

enchanted love by petals black

 

 

Reviews

[Sakshi]

A soothing and smooth read.

"divine be the day I find
the rarest rose of all
for with its petals a spell
be cast upon my lovers heart"

Love these lines!! You mind if I use them to write something of my own?

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Sorry I am not on h ere very much anymore. This poem was not written by me alone, so I would ask the you request this by (Eclipsing Moon) also, also when you stop on his page take a moment to enjoy his work. The 4 lines you ask about I did write and it is ok with me as long as you change then a smig. word for batem I can not offer as I have used them in a publishing already. Thanks.