Sweet taste of victory

I dream a dream of a better life

I will make it come true

I do not have to believe in myself

I just simply have to prove

all my fears and doubts untrue

 

the sweet taste of victory

 I long for

 

the sweet taste

 will purge my mouth

from the taste of sweat and tears

I will have on my tongue for years

 

a journey on this path to dreams

is not an easy road

it is        my passion

it is       my dream

and it’s worth every burden load

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Joshua W. Harris]

This is a beautiful piece, and I found I could connect to it much more potently because of how eerily similar it is to the mind and situation of a main character I am currently writing.
A beautifully described struggle, and the wonderful feeling of a struggles worth. =]

[Coyote Poetry]

A good dream is worth fighting for. Most good things in life need effort and hope. I like the hope and energy in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

beautiful and powerful write...

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very heartfelt strong write...
great work :)

[RachelReaper]

Powerful and to the point, I really like this. Winning your own battle and looking good doing it :)

[MandaBear]

Very cool :)

[Steven Cash]

Wonderful

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice work.

[Miss. Smith]

a very honest poem, i really liked it

[MOON]

A honest well versed write.

[Yheela]

Lovely. Believe in yourself and dreams will come true.