Journeys Way

I write to free my soul, to give a glimps of me. I follow no rules when writting, it's what sets me free.

A butterfly landed on me,

I never get lost for too long.

As I watched the bird in the tree,

it’s pure unforgettable song.

 

Nature has a way to call me;

it shows me my soul is not wrong.

I listen, for it sets me free,

there will be a day of new dawn.

 

Follow me on this journeys way,

Misty waters cool your soul.

The end will be a brand new day;

the earth bares food to make us whole.

 

Follow the mother deer and foal,

Be careful what you do and say,

Look deep in the earth like the mole,

Or the colors will turn all grey,

 

I’m a soul within this frame

Simplicity is what I seek

Wisdom will be my only claim

I’ll be full of knowledge, yet meek

~Melody

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I really have a strong love of nature poems. One of my favorites is by Alfred Lord Tennyson "The Brook". From the sounds of this poem, you'd probably appreciate it as well. I found it when I was a little girl in an antique book that my mother ended up giving me years later. This poem runs along the same emotional wavelength that that one does. Just enough calm to lull me into sleep I think. I can fall asleep with the images behind my eyelids and share this with my hubby in my dreams. :) Lovely imagery I think.

[Kristallo]

This is idyllic and so lovely. I love how frequently you reference nature, in all its splendor and inspirational power. This was very well written, I enjoyed it so much.

[Allie]

Nature is such a relief from the strife around us. Beautiful, and the last stanza is very strong and deep.

[Norma M Sutton]

I know many love the colored fonts, but I have difficulty reading them. Sorry I can't review what I can't read.

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I love the picture and I love the poem ^_^
Really beautiful!
100/100

[Loner]

Great write i must say........

[Kes]

This is very sweet. It's just so soothing. :) The imagery is fantastical as well.
Great work!
K

[Trusting]

This poem is so vivid! I can see that this poem is based in the season fall, correct? :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

Yes, as it is just around the corner, very good, most don’t pick up on the fact all my poems are based off seasons of time in nature or of life as well as the elements. Everything in life good or bad is but only for a season.

[Trusting]

Ha, I bet some other people understood but just didn't write it out in a review. And yes, I adore fall! I'm a big fan of Halloween, too. :)

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

My favorite times of year...Fall and Spring, Fav. Holidays; Halloween and Christmas!!!!!

[Kimberly "Melody" Carney]

I am an October babe yah know;)

[Yheela]

Nature is beautiful, we're lucky to be able to walk freely in her.

[Junert]

Very good. Love it.

[Raven Starhawk]

This begins so marvelously. Your words are like little pieces of candy in my mouth as I read them out loud. They appeal to the very nature I crawl inside of.