Vibrancy of life

I write to free my soul from words without me, go unspoken. I write to make you think, thoughts you already know.

 

Vibrancy of life, felt by all around

Rooted and steady, deep within the ground

I move slowly and speak the same

Every moment counts, this is not a game.

 

My heart overwhelmed, by all I have seen

Souls; starving, weakened, forgotten and lean.

Do we understand who we are?

Surly not, we’ve fallen so far!

 

Who still listens to their soul, you?

It will tell who you are and what to do.

I for one understand,

I am more than who I am.

 

In silence listen, with strength speak

Ignorance of soul makes one weak.

So set aside earth bound cares

Step out of yourself, take the dares.

 

This life is short, too short to waste

Make a difference, in boldness and haste.

 

~Melody

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

This has a zen quality to it. It makes us think of the universe and the vastness of it. It reminds us that we have a soul in there trying to guide us and keep us on the path of enlightenment. This has a great depth to it and it makes the mind and heart react together.

[J. F. Charleston]

Wow, this one was very touching in ways. When I'm alone outside and it's a pretty night, I strain to listen to the silence.

[lee von cleef]

Consumed by a soul ,my heart carries a spirit ,together they guide me, thank you for the blanket you wrapped around me,

[A. Mourraven]

This is absolutely pulchritudinous! You are a phenomenal poet; I look forward to reading your works of art, which these are truly. You are so uplifting and influential to everyone around you and everyone who reads your wonderful poetry.

I feel obligated to add: I adore the mood that you set as well, with the music it makes the reader feel completely at peace. I generously look forward to reading more of your literature!

[Syed Ali]

1 word. Beautiful :)

[Adam M. Snow]

Beautiful. Just wow, I mean wow I don't know what to say

[Tomi]

Very inspiring! and beautifully written! Thank you for sharing :)

[MOON]

Lovely rhythmic write live a life worth living.

[Ruth]

Beautiful!
Says so much with ease of flow and vision xoxo

[Megan Simpson]

This flows perfectly! I love it.You're poems keep getting better and better.

[Lily Mae]

To many listen to their ego and react ...listening to the core soul voice is what we so need to do.. I love this as I do all your work..xo